this is really good, yeah that sticks and stone may break my bones, but names will never hurt me is BS the person who said that clearly never had to endrue any kind of verbal abuse cause scars heal, but the names and labels that people come up with can last a lifetime if you don't stand up and fight those words, GREAT work it's really well well done, and brings up a very valid point, it seems very personal so thank you for sharing

Mankind's cruelty at its finest. All said and done. The strange breaks in the poem seems to inhibit effect, but the poem still gets the message out.

Pretty good.. I hate bullying... Only thing to work on maybe is your rhyming it doesnt really flow as well as it could

I love your poems! They are absolutely wonderful. I admit, I don't like it when you cut one sentence into two fragments, but that's it. Everything else is great. Perfect at a stretch (Nothing's perfect). Besides the whole fragment thing I won't change anything.-Kat(AK)

Getting your inspiration from a cliche is usually a bad idea; we already know the point and all that stuff and we don't want to read a whole poem about the same old thing.

Anyway, your rhymes also seem a little too self-conscious.