 Cloak-of-Shadows 2006-02-28 . chapter 1Quite true people are more confortable with other people... good and bad. In fact, if there is a mugging or fight... the more spectators, the less chance of anyone trying to stop them. Statistically proven. Despair seems at a max it seems closing to the end. Nice! |
 Miss Kai 2006-02-21 . chapter 1I like this poem too. Especially the second half of it. I just really like supernatural things I suppose. |
 Not Quite Dry Eyed 2006-02-20 . chapter 1This make so much sense to me...i understand how you feel...when i'm with my friends i feel like i can handle everything and i have no worries but when i'm alone and i have time to actually think i break down...this is a good poem...it conveys a lot of emotion...keep writing forever and always...please R&R me sometime...
~Twisted Harmony~ |
 pencilchewer 2006-02-20 . chapter 1Awesome!! very good.. keep writing~PencilChewer |
 AtaivasKathryn 2006-02-20 . chapter 1Brilliant! Fantastic! Magnificent! Outstanding! Phenomenal! Sensational! Terrific!I absolutely adore your writing! And you stopped making fragments. Much better. I look forward to reading more of your work.-Kat(AK) |