When I was reading this, I experienced a chill. It really was that good to me. I can't say much, but this poem really flowed well. I love the rhetorical questions.

When one comes out of a cocoon, aren't the changes supposed to be for the better? Another good metaphor used in your poems.

EB

someone's standing on the edge of a break through...wavering on whether or not take the jump...are you going to?

I like the description of feeling cramped...very different. I liked it. Keep up the good work!