Great peice. I loved how you worded it, And I adored the topic, its like an amazing influx of insight that you came up with. My favorite lines have to be:

"life moves fast

(time moves faster.)

and all we have are our dreams.

(somehow we’ll find hope.)

we talk about far away places, but remember

(to love home just the same.)"

fantastic lines. The words in paretheses made the poem all the more powerful and effective. Two thumbs up! Write on!

--Meme

hah, wow i feel kind of famous here. I ♥ the ending. It feels as if your slowly revealing something so magical. and it's really cool that you're able to read it three ways. very proficient :) Keep writing

Hey, inspired by me! I feel special. =D Great poem, great formatting...makes me sad, though. I don't like thinking about the days when our sleepovers will be just memories.

~Christine~

=D=D=Dthis is SO good. i like it. a lot. i read it all three ways. splendid.