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| nonaccount 2008-06-16 ch 14, | abuseI love this story. I read it once before and am puzzled now as to why I never reviewed. Oh well, better late then never. |
| theapathycrusade 2008-05-20 ch 14, | abuseI read this all the way through - it was phenomenal! Your writing is great, and the characters...it was awesome. I'm glad they finally got together in a *sober* state. Very cool, and I really enjoyed the ending from Matthew's POV. I think you did a great job tackling hard issues like nazism, mixed marriages, that kind of thing. It was excellent! And Alex is so cute. |
| mia5081 2007-07-13 ch 14, | abuseThat was so sweet. Ian is Mikey and Dane's father isn't he? If he is, well that's a bit of hypocrisy lol. And I've been wondering through out the entire story, is Matthew the Matt that we met in My Lover, Victor? And wasn't he with Jacob, who Alex says is his friend...I'm just wondering if I'm missing something lol. But I loved the story! ~Mis |
| Tackygeek 2007-07-06 ch 14, | abuseOh this is wonderful. I feel so giddy right now. Thanks, you made my day. I love this story, but I pretty much love all your stories and I have a hard time picking favorites. I give up. Please don't stop writing. Ever. Thanks! |
| Midnights Scream 2007-05-17 ch 14, | abuse*Snicker* that was an amazing ending thought the confession of love seemed a little sudden and out of place, but it was really really good! |
| Midnights Scream 2007-05-17 ch 11, | abusethat could've gone better, but hey Matthew had to find out sooner or later that Alex was a snoop. I'm falling in love with this story it's amazing. |
| Midnights Scream 2007-05-17 ch 1, | abuse*snicker* what an interesting way to introduce your characters. |
| Sirivinda 2007-05-11 ch 14, | abuseAw... This story is like sugar and spice. :) I think it's quite impossible not to fall in love with Matthew. I've got just one tiny little bit of constructive criticism - apart from this I think it's really quite perfect... Maybe I'm mistaking, but I think you're refering to Peter as "James" at one point? Otherwise, pretty god damn good. And really sweet. And you know, the rest of it. I'm a wee bit tipsy, so this review might make no sense whatsoever, but just, yeah... I love it. Haha. All the best, Sirivinda. |
| erica 2006-11-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story makes me smile. I really like it. |
| Collar de Espinas 2006-06-30 ch 1, | abuseI figured I should probably start reading more of your stories rather than just the Brett/Michael series so started off on this one. I'm not sure if it's 'cause I'm knackered as ** and thus, quite a lot of things make me laugh right now but I grinned like an idiot when you mentioned Malaysia. I'm Malaysian. *grins* Anyway, will read on when am not in dire need of sleep- great stuff so far. |
| kimper 2006-06-13 ch 14, | abuseThat was such an excellent piece :) You really brought the characters to life and their story was detailed and well done. Great Job! Can't wait to explore more of your writing :) |
| Lidyah 2006-05-22 ch 14, anon. | abuseExcellent story. Different and interesting. Thanks for sharing :) |
| rodeoclown 2006-05-14 ch 14, | abuseI really enjoyed this story! Even more so being to read it all in one shot. The characters and their problems were complex and well developed and you did a good job of sustaining the tension between them. The ending made me warm and fuzzy inside. Definitely one of those really good stories that I don't find very often...it's going on my favorites. |
| whatifisaidno 2006-03-23 ch 14, anon. | abuse-squeak- Alex. Everything is "because I love him." aw. |
| silencio 2006-03-05 ch 14, anon. | abuseaww.. that was really good! |