Nice effects. I think I know what this is about: artists' deprivation/uber-life, how we "stay in books" and "starve" but also "sing until you burn. whisper till you’re cooled"? If not, that's alright. I also like "follow like you do. lead when you can. " It's somehow realistic. The second 'paragraph' adds something, but also possibly takes away some art. Very creative.

Loved it since the beginng. I think maybe we'd all be better off it we stuck to faeries and burned the tests. It's simple but really pretty.(P.S-Happy to have met another FLB fan...We can always find each other, lol. I personally didn't love 'The hanged man' though..)

Oh, wow, I love this. It's so gorgeous and (it seems like a lame word) effective. And affecting. Wow. I'm putting it on my favourites.

I love the top line. Great advice.

I started to quote a favorite line but I realized I honestly had highlighted the whole thing... I guess I'll pick three favorite parts? (Though I swear I love it all.)

"stick to fairies. stay in books. love the knights. dismiss the boys." Could that piece of advice be any more perfect? Don't you wish you could follow it? I know I do.

"read the words. forget the letters. save the notes. burn the tests. write. dream. remember." Wow... it's beautiful. Especially "read the words, forget the letters" Amazing.

"sing until you burn. whisper till you’re cooled." Ooh, made me shiver.

Just... I don't have a word for how amazing this is. It's just mindblowing perfection and I LOVE it. Never stop writing.

This is so extremely awesome. I love the style you've used in this; addressing the reader. It's absolutely amazing/shiny/gorgeous/wonderful/brilliant, and every other beautiful word there is.

beautiful.

wow

You better not become anorexic, or I'll shoot you. Anyways, "break with oceans. sleep with clouds." love those lines, not quite sure why, but they really stood out. Overall, the whole thing flows really well- like water. Nice, strong ending. It made an impression. But what are you so confused about? Sort of seems like you're trying to get away from reality...