(queue kickass solo) :D love it! though it should probably be "cue" rather than "queue" also, in the 2nd stanza, should it read "your" instead of "you"? sorry to be so picky, its just a shame to see typos in something so good. i dont usually like this kinda rhyme scheme, seems a little predictable, but you use it well. nicely done there Dee,

Han.

This sounds like it could be a hell awesome rock/metal song...and if it ever became one i would listen2 it...i wrote a few songs...u should chek em out mayb...a haunted fairytale and stan'd...neways awesum work^_^