This chapter showed deeper emotions and great description, I love it! update soon, and i really need to know where Hilary is...!!

Woah, great chapter!! Can't stand the suspense. Where is Hilary? Oh god, I simply HAVE to know. Update soon!

Okay, Tiffany's safe! Yay, you also put it in her POV! Now where is Hilary though? God, this is getting good and suspenceful! Can't wait, and update soon!

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The descriptions were great yet mild, making it easy to visualize and I'm really starting to feel sorry for Ben. Where's Hilary? No seriously. I have a bad feeling about Scott...

This chapter's my favorite so far! It had more emotion in it, and I could totally relate to Ben's situation. Poor ben, I guess he's feeling pretty mixed up...

Wow! That was a great start. Intrigueing plot, and enough mystery to keep me clicking on to Chapter Two. Can't wait to check it out, great work!

Very good, very interesting plot, but I think you had a mistake in the first paragraph: the last two sentences should be in the past tense.

Another really good chapter. I hope to see more soon.

oO I haven't reviewd in a long time so sorry about that anyways...this was a great chapter as were the others...update soon and I'll try to remember to come and review your stories...now if only life weren't so crammed

I really meant to read and review this a long time ago, I've just been busy with school work and writing Popular and my other stories.

Anyway, onto the review. It's a good story so far, but I would really like a little bit description because I have no idea what the characters look like.

And my first guess, Ms. Taylor is definitely involved somehow, I just don't know if she's good, bad, or just force that doesn't choose sides.

I think you should stick time travel in there somewhere. I'm reading The Time Traveller's Wife at the moment, and whilst last time i read it, i found the ending rather bland, i'm hoping that this time round it will have the power to move me.

So time travel. Equals awesome :-) very nice work, keep it coming.

This is a good start. I want to see where this is going. Please continute.

wow this is really good, update can't wait to see what'l happen

You are going to continue? I hope so. Intriguing...