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iminluv 2008-09-17 . chapter 3
love this! plz continue
Image of the Invisible 2006-06-17 . chapter 3
Love it, Rin. Update son! Sorry I was late. I haven't logged on in ages. See you.
Carbon Slash 2006-02-28 . chapter 3
I love you too, my dear =)

... and I love Spike. Haha =P Poor Riss... breaking down in front of Taylor. She really likes him. Oh well. I'll say go for Spike instead XD

"Taylor said that I was a “selfish little ** who only wants her own happiness before others’ happiness” in all his glory and redundancy." - my god. Taylor is so insensitive. I mean, you just don't talk about your best friend like that. He's such a jerk.

So... the preview sounds interesting. Can't wait till the next chapter =) Oh... and... it doesn't matter if your chapter is short if you update fast =)
LlamaLlamaDuckie 2006-02-28 . chapter 3
i'm loved? for real! wahoo! i'll give you a yellow skittle! hm skittles... anyway back on track i love this chappie! i want a william... spike... where can i get one? lol anyway love it keep writing ... todays hypernedd cauded by: galaxy chocolate! siobhan x
mary4angelus 2006-02-28 . chapter 3
great story u got going there.Can't wait to read more!Update soon
Carbon Slash 2006-02-27 . chapter 2
What a short chapter, hahaha. Anyway, more denial from Riss...

"When he hugs you, you turn into tomato paste." I love this sentence. It's more original than saying "you turn into mush" haha.

Omg I love hot goths. Can't wait to know his name. Update really soon!
LlamaLlamaDuckie 2006-02-27 . chapter 2
WAHOO! this time i had skittles but only the red and purple ones! anyway sure u dint need to no tht! anyway i love the chapter and cant wait to read more! he he he - siobhan x
Carbon Slash 2006-02-22 . chapter 1
Great beginning =) I love how you start this chapter. “First love never dies.” o_O Just to let you know, I'm going to use a few quotes from your story in this review =P

"Okay, so what if your first love was your seatmate in first grade? That so dies." I love this sentence. So brillant XD "I mean, just because he lent me his pencil and gave me a really cute smile back then doesn’t mean that I’d spend the rest of my life with him." This cracks me up, hahaha.

"Can we just say we’re hanging around the middle of the ladder and not going any higher?" Such cynical sarcasm. Love it.

"Taylor rubbed his arm and opened his locker, his long brown bangs falling into his eyes. It actually made me feel sort of queasy in my stomach, but I shrugged it off. Hey, I didn’t eat breakfast." Denial! Hehehehe.

Riss so obviously likes Taylor *rolls eyes* I think Allie knows it.

“My little ‘Rissa is finally turning into a girl,” Taylor squealed, wrapping his arms around me. - Aw, Taylor is so cute here. I feel like pinching his cheeks... =_=

Sorry, I don't really feel vocal right now, so mostly I'm using quotes from your story to review. But I definitely love it XD

Till the next chapter then~
LlamaLlamaDuckie 2006-02-20 . chapter 1
WO me like! me like alot! sorry i've had sugar n im slightly hyper but i like your story alot! and its really good and now ill stop tlking in fear of tlking to much! not that you know me ... Bye! siobhan x
dee 2006-02-20 . chapter 1
aww me like!! its so good, very well writtne. keep up the good work!
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