fix the typo and its perfect
good through and through
especailly the beginning
Thumbs up!

i hope this poem isn't talking about you! = ) even though i've never seen you i'm sure your beatiful, especailly on the inside, your poems are beatiful as well, this is another really good one, the ryhme scheme sucks you in and the story is very tragic,

all in all very good!

This is a really great pome, i can identify with it, its so sad but really good.

this piece is simply stunning. Its so beautiful, and i've seen my friends go through this too many times. But I STILL think they're incredibly beautiful no matter how many times they keep on falling.

wow, that's really good. So sad, and so beautiful. And so true...