I know this feeling.. I guess sometimes you just have to take the chance and reach, don't you?

Katrina.xx

I like this a lot, very sweet. Good work

oh wow. i just love your work! keep writing!

--sunshine

Oh! blink lyrics! you caught my attention

This was beautiful and so sad, the last part really touched me. Great work!

Nice. The only thing that bugged me was "& all I could do is wonder" because it should be was and I am a grammer **.

But ignoring that, I liked it. Especially the lack of capitalization.

this is so pretty. it's been a while since i've read something like this.

interesting imagery. nice work!