Nice! A few words to describe a feeling we've all had.

hey it's Ash!! wow amazing poem. i am but an amateur in the world of poetry, and this is a really great piece. now i must go read the others. -Ash

Shakingly full of pithy. It's so very lovely, so indeed poetical, but exhaling a cool ache. The first two lines and then 'And I break' was a brilliant punctuation.

wow... excellent, i really like it! i can def. relate. keep writting and i would really like it if u read some of my other poems b/c u gave some good advice! (i'm considering changing it)

Strong emotion. It's great!

I really like the parallelism (forgive my use of random and possibly incorrect terms) in your structure with "porcelain made" and "all inside". :)