wow! excelent poem. it really has deep emotion and the rhyming is excellent! great job!!

great work, you showed how depression effects a person perfect, i like it a lot, and it's very nicely written, keep it up, thank you for sharing

argh...powerful poem. Brings up some awful memories of a suicide a couple of years before. I-I have nothing to say; the others have said much is already said.

Hey, I was your first official fan! Don't you forget it. Grr...

Except I'm not so much a fan of this poem. It's still really good, it just scares me a little. Ok, more like a lot. Stop being so depressing! Write that happy sonnet damn you.

This is even better than your other poems! It seems to describe how I feel as well. As I said before, you have great talent. I hope you keep writing as I am now an official fan.-Kat (AK

wonderfully beautiful dark poem. i loved it. explains it perfectly. i can relate very much so. would you review some of my poems? please keep writing, trust me; it helps.