Reviews for Centre of Gravity

BlueJayWalking 2006-06-12 ch 1,	abuseThanks for your review.:) I was so pleased I decided to come and see who you were. Hahaha. And ohh I love this poem! It's got some really...unusual imagery in it - "When the lone flower wilts...And the scratched record plays...Where mist meets heat, When earth scorches ocean, And shadows of nothing, Race across the sky". Those lines have left me in rapture. I do believe this is your best work - you've managed very impressively to avoid cliches/repeated concepts. Very interesting titling too. Somehow the whole poem reminds me of sci-fi...of clashes between worlds of reality and fantasy...very cool. Okay I shall stop rambling. Good work!!beams
LauraKM 2006-03-10 ch 1,	abuseI love how the theme of music seems to run though all of your poetry, you use some great imagery. Especially like the last two lines of this. However for me, it could do with a little punctuation. (Am also intrigued as to why A major?)
hey maria 2006-02-20 ch 1,	abuseGreat imagery in this - I especially liked "When the loving heart breaks/And the scratched record plays" and "When earth scorches ocean." Also, the repetition of "This is where" works well. Great job.