Very well done...but just a comment (an honest opinion, not a flame) :) Just leave the country if you don't like it. That's what I did. I left America, live 18,0 miles away from the freakin' place. Do that, instead of uprising. It has enough problems. Sometimes, you got to let things go...that country is one of em. Let the government dig the government out.

This is over rated. T, maybe, but M is unnecessary. But the actual poem is good.

Very good at some points. If the goverment is not caring for the poor and sad, then why is unemploment at its lowest in 10 years? And I truly don't believe America evil, no country is, only its goverment make it that way. ^_^