   carcar2110 2008-06-09 . chapter 13I loved that! That was a really good story! I was just looking at fics on here, and I saw the name "Carly" in your summary for Chaotic (which I'm going to read next), and it caught my eye because my name is actually Carly - spelled the same and everything. I saw it was a sequel to this story so I read this one first, and when Amanda named her son, I laughed because, coincedentally, I have a really good friend named Dylan. Just a couple things that made me smile! Anyway, really great fic and I can't wait to read the next one!
Carly ;) |
 outsidersgirl 2007-10-28 . chapter 13a good story |
| scifi fanatic 2007-04-23 . chapter 13 a very touching story ,i thought was well written .please keep up the excellent work,regards geoff |
| Alenor 2006-06-04 . chapter 13 hmm, good story. cya later. |
| StuckInTwilight 2006-03-22 . chapter 13 I loved it. I really really did. Amazing story! |
| Things unsaid 2006-03-03 . chapter 2 This is good,I know you updated but I haven't been able to read the other the chapters yet |
| Things unsaid 2006-02-24 . chapter 1 This awesome story continue. |
| Lyorna 2006-02-22 . chapter 9 Hello, I've been reading your story for a while and I find it very sweet and of course interesting. It made me think a lot, because a while ago I had a delay and made a pregnancy test and it made me wonder a lot about what would have happend if... you know if I was pregnant.
I hope you keep on writing because I want to know what happens with Dylan's father. Is he going to start talking soon? I started at 5 months.
Congrats for the sroty! |
 CK Shorty 2006-02-21 . chapter 3I like the song by Britney 'Someday..' Perfect song for the story. What ever happened to Jason?
CK |
| CK Shorty 2006-02-21 . chapter 2 Still good. I just think that the characters seem to be taking the pregnancy at 14 a bit lightly, but it's still good! it's a good read, don't get me wrong :)! I'm reading to find out what happens.
CK |
| CK Shorty 2006-02-21 . chapter 1 Really good so far..and I understand the rushing of chapters. I do that too in some of my fics. The chapter was good, but I think there could've been a bit more of character description of how they look, act, etc. But it's still fine :) Keep up the good work.
CK |
 Demena 2006-02-21 . chapter 7Very nice piece of work. I had to leave several times for stuff...but i always hurried back to read the rest of this story. Keep it up! |
| brokendreams21 2006-02-20 . chapter 1 Woah. No way. I know someone named Amanda Lewis. She goes to my school. Great first chapter! Keep up the great work. |
 x.your.brand.new.mistake.x 2006-02-20 . chapter 1Interesting. Good luck God bless! |
| spydercrystal 2006-02-20 . chapter 1 Update soon. Sounds like a good story |
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