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Miss Kai 2006-02-21 . chapter 1
I really like this poem as well, especially the last couple lines. The only suggestion I can offer is maybe try not to repeat words so much like "me". Try to think of other words to rhyme instead. Anyway, good job!
The Postscript 2006-02-20 . chapter 1
Yeah...I know what this feels like, but I've tried to be more open lately. Because no one will step into your world and try to help you if you're not letting them...so, yeah. Nice write. Very clear for such confusing feelings. ^^ Keep writing.
Cloak-of-Shadows 2006-02-20 . chapter 1
Powerful poem you have here...like it!

:p

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