I love this poem. I like the whole supernatural element to it. It's quite different from your other poems while still maintaining your unique voice. Great job!
Nice, I'd have to say... this poem for some reason helped me recall several night terrors I had growing up. Very dark poem... Well done! I believe you are using (hope I remember this correctly) Shakespearian sonnet style wonderfully in this poem.
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