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Opal Rose 2008-08-08 ch 29,	abuseWoah, you rewrote it? But it was so good the first time... Now I have to read it again. Heh. And the sequel, 'cause that looks good too. I wonder why I haven't read it before... Anyway, I'm off to start re-reading. :)
a beginner 2008-08-06 ch 10,	abuse:)
Firefly's Locket 2008-08-05 ch 29,	abuseGasps Hurray!
joseyann 2008-07-01 ch 27,	abusei love this story so much.. i felt a real connection with the characters... i cried so much at the end...but it this story was worth my whole day reading
katie mase 2008-06-25 ch 28,	abuseSo I found this story and I have to say I loved every bit of it! Rox was probably my favorite character and I really wished he was in it more, but regardless it was still amazing. Just awesome and amazing and wonderful.
Electric Sky 2008-06-22 ch 28,	abuseclears throat tries to compose self erm... 'kay, so I'm a little insane and I like to read really old stories on fictionpress and review them anyway... just so you know. so anyway... OHMYGODOHMYGODOHMYGOD this story is awesome. seriously, if this was published it would definitely be my favorite book, framed and hung up on a my wall. its awesome. it's made of awesomeness. have I said it's awesome yet? it's awesome. ...anyways, I don't even know where to begin. the whole plot is fantastic, the characters are real and well constructed, and its full of twists. I stayed up for two entire nights reading this. seriously. it's freaking 7:29 AM. I'm not kidding. I think I may die of exhaustion. but I don't care, because it was worth it and now I can sleep happy. the ending was fantastic and unexpected, and I'd beg beg beg for a sequel (even though its like, two years later coughcough) but I know there's not much left to cover. you wrapped it up perfectly and flawlessly, even though I'd KILL to know what happened next, haha. I DID cry when Aden left... a lot. surprisingly, I cried even more when "Hayden" appeared. I always search stories with over 100,0 words and under completed, and in Young Adult only a few come up and yours was always one of them, but I always skimmed past it thinking it was stupid, untill last night I started reading and, well, couldn't stop. WOW I'm babbling and I probably sound like a completely obsessed idiot! yay! it's 7:35 AM! I think I might be clinically dead! I need to shut up now! but there's something else I was going to say but I forgot! why am I using so many exclamation points?! ...umm... I think I may go now. you're awesome, your stories are awesome, I hope you get this publsihed someday, and I hope to god you have more on fiction press. and I think you might have a very nice career in writing ahead of you. Lots of love, admiration and wishes for success, ES
Her Name 2008-02-23 ch 4,	abuseI'm in love with the way you write. You have a way of making someone feel something when they read it, and I love that feeling. :] But when I was reading this chapter, Tegan and Sara began to play, the song Walking With a Ghost. I thought that was a bit ironic, huh?
Speirmint 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abuseJust read the entire story, was brilliant made me laugh and cry. Great work.
Samana Cay 2007-08-23 ch 28,	abuseI just have to say that this is possibly the best story I've ever read (and that is including every book, fanfiction, etc.) I honestly think it would make an amazing novel. I know you probably won't respond to this since you've finished your story, but the one thing that really confused me was the epilogue. Not the WHOLE chapter but specifics. Like does I know Loreli loves Seth in a nonsexual way (haha the word sexual doesn't make me laugh but nonsexual always does sorry I'm a bit weird like that) but is Seth in love with her? Another thing: Is Hayden Aden/Did Aden come back alltogether as a human? If he did then why did he pretend not to know them?
cherrypiesizzle 2007-08-13 ch 12,	abuseActually, I think Seth is creepy, emo, and weird. I'm not saying that emos are bad..but he's just strange, that one. Like those violent, abusive boyfriends.
liwen ;D 2007-06-18 ch 27, anon.	abuseI love you. :D this is totally the first and only story that has ever made me cry & damn i didn't even cry when i watched titanic, or any other movie/book actually. You're a genius! & ps, i'm a little retarded but did Aden really come back in the last part? As in, regain his memory?
Jessie 2007-06-07 ch 1, anon.	abuseI ABSOLUTELY FRIGGIN LOVE IT! in case there was any misconceptions about my previous statement your story rocked my friggin socks. I loved the ending and Im in deep regret that the sequel hasnt been published yet. I wish I had so sort of founded complament to say other than I just loved it but that is just the most befitting words for it congrads on a beautifully written story with deep and meaningful charachters and a truly delightful plot line! Jessie
Firefly's Locket 2007-06-05 ch 28,	abuseI'm crying and laughing, and crying and laughing. And I can't say much more than that except... Have you ever watched Susie Q.?
Firefly's Locket 2007-06-05 ch 26,	abuseMaybe it's silly to think Rox saying hello and goodbye was important? ...I don't want them to leave. The next chapter is the last one. I'm going to cry, aren't I? Oh, dear.
Firefly's Locket 2007-06-05 ch 25,	abuseSeth nodded his head and a smile cracked the stone face he so commonly wore anymore. “I can even walk without holding someone’s hand.” That was both really funny and really sweet at the same time. HeH. ^_^ Some mistakes, though. "I don’t have to go through the same things you did to understand what you." I'm not really sure what that's supposed to be. ~_~; "...that then you’re life is never going to have a chance of healing." "Your" instead of "you're".

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