I'm sorry for misreading your poem. :) I dunno, it was a bad day, and I had no sense of humor.

But, unfortunately, I hate to tell you that the thing you read and thought was a story wasn't a story at all. It was a poem. There wasn't supposed to be any description, it wasn't supposed to be anything but a conversation.

And, hopefully, I read this one right. :) I like it alot. You're really quite good at the whole rhyme scheme thing. I can't do it at all, I feel like I'm in a straight jacket. And because of my ineptitude at rhythym, I really respect someone with the skills to pull it off. :) Lovely.