I love the Saw movies... Oh, dear. I'm signing off. All I do is say stupid crap and then comment on how good the poem was. So expect a "nice job" from me and that is all, goodbye.

*eye twitch* ...whoa...umm...WHOA! Fantastic poem! I would go in deeply why I like it, but the greatest thing that your poem does is formulate images into the reader's mind, though not really specifing 'what'. Uhh...looking back to what I wrote, I don't think I explained it well...argh...ah well, in other words: Fav!

I read this with no knowledge of Saw II, but I thought it was intriguing nonetheless. Great standalone poem, and I'm sure it would have a different view if I'd seen the movie. Good job.