|Reviews for Frigid|
| sunday night sky 2/21/06 . chapter 1
'white winter floating' - such beautiful imagery! i love it!
| bleed gilead 2/21/06 . chapter 1
i somehow think that condensed to a haiku, it loses a lot of the grace. as forlorn as the images are, they connect- well, they don't. they should and they can, but the haiku format doesn't give you enough time in this particular scenario. i'd suggest a slight expansion (still short but longer than a haiku) to let the poem flesh out by itself.
| frayedlifeforce 2/21/06 . chapter 1
pretty, great imagery. you have a real feeling for hakius. nice work./
| Aquafied 2/20/06 . chapter 1
turning with the cold beautiful
and chilly bays remind me of winter whispers, cold and unfeeling
| Nivek Relleom 2/20/06 . chapter 1
very pretty and thought provoking. nice job.
| miss understanding 2/20/06 . chapter 1
I love haiku poetry ... so simple, and yet so elegant. This poem makes me think of a tropical haven.
| breezy nostrils 2/20/06 . chapter 1
so delicate and beautiful. nice work!