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| Kiichigo 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I really like every text you like ^^ ! But are you gonna update soon 'cause it has been almost a year since the last one ? |
| Momiro 2006-10-24 ch 7, | abuseHi Hi OMG, like great story!, I love Kayan, I can like totally relate to him^^, except I don't have a boyfriend *laughs* oh well, anyway, the story is really good, alittle fictatious, but very believeable, awesome job, keep up the great work |
| Luci-chan's Lunchbox Of Doo... 2006-10-21 ch 7, | abuseUPDATE! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! This may seem horrible to say, but as much as I love LDILT, this is so much better! So much more realistic! And funny! But like I said, I love the other too, and I would love for you to update any of them! ♥. P.S. The fanfic with Wraithy is almost finished! I'll send it to you ASAP! |
| Single Black Rose 2006-10-19 ch 7, | abuseUPDATE SOON...please? Rose |
| Ayame-Sohma's-Pet-Kitten 2006-07-27 ch 7, | abuseI love it! The story is great so far! I read "Let's Do It Like This", and that one was really great, too. I love Kayan, he's so cute! I wanna see his purple underwear... But anyway, James and Kayan are such a perfect pair. I can't wait to read more! Write soon, please!~Ayame-chan |
| Star Kitten 2006-06-05 ch 7, anon. | abuseAWS! ME LUVSA THIS TO! *snuggles teh Kayan* Mweep! =3 He is just so damn cute it's not funny! *hugs James* ... And he'd probably hurt me if I hugged Kayan and not me. o_O *pets James* X3 Yey. I still wanna pour coffee on Wraith's head. o_O |
| Sweet But Evil Beauty 2006-05-31 ch 7, | abusei loved this story very much do you mind if i use some of your characters and twist them a little ( change them for my stories ) please say yes that was great! |
| NeoZenith 2006-05-20 ch 7, | abuseI love this story...In fact I love this series (well...the series and the split offs that you've done...) Kayan and James are too cute for words. However I'm a bit confused, James is blind, right? So how can he tell exactly where his father is without Vincent, Kayan, Sadie, or his mother helping him? Anyways, jsut wanted to tell you that you're doing a great job and to encourage you to keep up the good work. |
| andfound815 2006-05-19 ch 7, | abuseExcellent. Just wonderful. Great job, and I'll definitely be coming back for more. |
| Eldarwen Telrunya 2006-05-19 ch 7, | abusethis is such a cute and funny story. keep writing. |
| Esquirella 2006-05-19 ch 7, | abusePoor James! Well now at least he can holf Kayan when he dreams about him. |
| Drum Boi 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseI love this story. I'm kinda new to this site, so I thought reading a story that was more along the lines of my "genre" would help me get a feeling for this all. I LOVE IT. I just have two questions though: 1) Why is Kayan portrayed very...girly? I've never met or heard of a guy so...girlish. I mean, yeah he's gay (I am too...) but why is he a girl-type? 2) James seems too...convincing. I noticed that when he made the shift from loner to "the Clique", there wasn't really much of a change of personality. Am I missing something? Nice story! Keep it up! |
| BloodyDestiny 2006-05-18 ch 7, | abuseVery true they do end up on the flor by the time they reach the bed room anyways so why not put them there in the first place. Good job on all stories keep it up. |
| paledaisy78 2006-04-23 ch 6, | abuseagain, i really need the whole sight thing to be cleared up. the plot and stuff is still good and it has nice drama, but James' sight is distracting. |
| paledaisy78 2006-04-23 ch 3, | abuseBUT HE CAN"T SEE! how can he beat someone up if he can't see?!?!?! did i miss something crucial to the story? i mean, i like the whole story line and stuff, but this is unrealistic. im sorry, but it is. |