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Jezsh 2006-02-28 . chapter 1
oh how lovely. 'the headlights strange roses bloomingfebrile against the snow' beautiful wording. I like the last stanza a lot. This has a delicacy of late night and loneliness, a sort of distance. Great work/
a lonely september 2006-02-27 . chapter 1
loved the last stanza. ended this poem sweetly.
hey maria 2006-02-24 . chapter 1
"the headlights strange roses bloomingfebrile against the snow"

I like it too.
GypsyMothra 2006-02-21 . chapter 1
Very nice, simple moment. Beautiful.
Faithless Juliet 2006-02-21 . chapter 1
That was a beautiful picture displayed. I loved that last part - I could see it, like I was there.

Juliet.
forsakensmile 2006-02-21 . chapter 1
I like how you portrayed the intimacy amidst a cold and numb world. Wonderful.
Sterces 2006-02-20 . chapter 1
Well, I know why I like this. I like the images it brings to mind. It also has a nice overall feeling to it. Very ncie!

sterces
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