 Jezsh 2006-02-28 . chapter 1oh how lovely. 'the headlights strange roses bloomingfebrile against the snow' beautiful wording. I like the last stanza a lot. This has a delicacy of late night and loneliness, a sort of distance. Great work/ |
 a lonely september 2006-02-27 . chapter 1loved the last stanza. ended this poem sweetly. |
 hey maria 2006-02-24 . chapter 1"the headlights strange roses bloomingfebrile against the snow"
I like it too. |
 GypsyMothra 2006-02-21 . chapter 1Very nice, simple moment. Beautiful. |
 Faithless Juliet 2006-02-21 . chapter 1That was a beautiful picture displayed. I loved that last part - I could see it, like I was there.
Juliet. |
 forsakensmile 2006-02-21 . chapter 1I like how you portrayed the intimacy amidst a cold and numb world. Wonderful. |
 Sterces 2006-02-20 . chapter 1Well, I know why I like this. I like the images it brings to mind. It also has a nice overall feeling to it. Very ncie!
sterces |