   stained blue 2008-06-02 . chapter 1it has that sad little feel to it,
heartbreaking, kinda. |
 Sunami Silverblade 2006-04-01 . chapter 1I love this.
"...Or maybe it wasn't bright enough..."
Beautiful. |
| a moth in lace 2006-03-27 . chapter 1 This is amazingly beautiful and I love it love it love it love it. And I love you too. K? Don't forget. Promise? K. Okay.
Okay.
Love. |
| It Sounds Horrible 2006-02-26 . chapter 1 "the trees would applaudand the grass gave a standing ovation."
I liked those lines. Nothing that's good lasts. again I lika. I rally lika. |
 lackluster 2006-02-26 . chapter 1beautiful. |
 poetic abortion 2006-02-21 . chapter 1my god, this was an addictive read. iamlovingthis.
~* noelle |
| forsakensmile 2006-02-21 . chapter 1 The contrast given is really good. I like it. |
| Aquafied 2006-02-20 . chapter 1 it seemed moreyou named it miseryand i was nothing.
but i dont know, thats my take.
its so bright yet dark.simply wonderful |
 wordsworth in a garbage can 2006-02-20 . chapter 1the hopelessness was gorgeous. |
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