Succinctly Sad

As so often happens...

nice little haiku, muchly good

(finally a male writer who isn't gushing or unable to string to words together. oh ouch I stereotyped, but it's the saf and often truth)

Brilliant.

reminds me of "i don't believe in an interventionalist god/ but i know, darling, that you do"

beautiful in its simplicity, opens a huge landscape of possible interpretations... gorgeous.

That is so sad. Its really good, but sad. Good Job.

this is ** gorgeous(sp?) i loved it. so short but with a ** powerful punch (god.. that was corny) but really, great job on this one. *faves*

The second line is chilling since i was expecting more of a spiritual poem. but it works. Keep writing

i love this. something dark about it... great work. almost like a haiku. beautiful!

i adore your stark truths. you're brilliant.