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False Pretense 2006-04-27 . chapter 1
I can relate to most of your poems. One quick fix though: You spelled 'your' wrong in the 11th line... Sorry. I'm a spelling and grammar freak. :) Keep writing!

~Aarahiti
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-02-20 . chapter 1
I hope this makes you happy. ^_^ I really like this one. I wish those people could read this and finally see what they've become. Wonderful work, keep writing.
Novus Lacuna 2006-02-20 . chapter 1
really interesting take on cliques. I liked the ending upon a second reading, I think it works. Great Job
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