Beautiful. So sad and full of longing, so hopeful and filled with fear. I love it.

First of all, thank you for reviewing my poem! It is very much appreciated. I thought to do you the honour as well. I've read your Untold Confession and Unrequited and thought they were beautiful. You're a poet, that's certain. I however, am not a constant poet. More a spontaneos poet than anything else. Me, I'm a writer. And I can see you're a writer too. You've got both ends tied in a knot, which is good! Well, thank you again. Poems were great!

o.o this is a really good poem >< I wish i could write something like tht =/ i sux at poems lol anywayz i like it ^^ (hehe)

I Love this peom it was well written good job. I do wonder when you have stopped your stories. Personally as a reader I think you were doing fine they were wonderfull stories. As readers on FP I think we all understand that most of the stories are in progress and that the author is working on making their stories better. I hope my little pep talk helped inspire you in the littlest bit

~ Jen