|Reviews for The Last Addiction 3|
| La-rose-de-soleil 12/18/06 . chapter 1
Really cool. I love the phrases "living decay" and "dead girls don't fuck." You're a great writer.
| lostandwandering 2/20/06 . chapter 1
i liked the poem. espcially this stanza,"The scars up their arms are like the rings in a tree -But instead of how many years they’ve lived -They count how many times they’ve wanted to die" i loved the comparison of the rings on the tree to the times of the thoughts of death. that is perfect and quite accurate also. the last sentence ended it perfectly, "This is the last addiction" but the short stanza's first line kinda threw the poem off a little. but i still get the point you where trying to make with it, it just threw off the cutting/drug flow. please keep writing. would you review some of my poems? again, keep writing.