Different than what I usually come across(no, it's not a bad thing.) I like the last few stanzas. . . Much more direct than most poems I've read. I like it. I like "Phone rings/Havoc pursues" a lot, too. Good job!

sounds like a person completely blinded by love, or whatever you may call it~ i like how you portrayed it

keep writing!

This is so good. Very powerful and thought provoking. Very well written, good job! V x

you're probably right. If he's as young as I think he is (middle school age) then it's probably just a dumb puppy love that kids get. ^_^ don't sweat on it too much unless the lil harlot hurts him. ^_~

This is very good and i bet loads of people can relate as we've all been at this point sometime in our lives, well done, very well expressed!

Hmm..a rather harsh look at young puppy love. But well writen.

really good, and very true.

ah, the horrific beauty of young love. awesome job :)

keep on writing ~~Wintertigress-:|:-