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| Spare Change 2006-03-24 ch 1,  | abuseHmm, your words are so eloquent. I imagine a dreamy, playful, curious tune playing in the background. Haha. Very good, especially the last line. I like the idea of falling to grace, it just echoes in the mind. (ps. thank you for your kind reviews. :) ) |
| FELICIA-SPENCER 2006-03-22 ch 1, | abuseTwo thumbs up. I loved this especially the end. Flawless...simply flawless. Keep up the awesome work. Laters. |
| she's not breathing 2006-03-03 ch 1, | abusewow. love the word choice. soso beautiful & wonderfully layered. absolutely beautiful. brilliant ending, too. i'm blown away by this. ~kait |
| HellHeartedlyBent 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abusewow. very hard hitting ending. this was so good. i find its one of your best ^_^. powerful imagery and great vocabulary. keep it up |
| lackluster 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abusei like the feeling in this. and especially the third stanza. |
| frigg 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abusewonderful as always hon. I love the alliteration in 'cordial closure' and the flow of this piece is very good. I love the lines 'sleep as the gentleset man / clockwork eloigning / in melodious nightingale' Brava! J |
| crazy dog events 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseI bit more fragmented than usual, but then again, I'm biased, and a devout member of the church of narrative poetry. Still, gorgeous. I loved the last stanza, and that last line, which it self seemed like some sort of chimed and dimming chord. Love, as always. |
| gitana 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThe imagery in this is delicious (and the vocabulary, frankly daunting--in the good way of course). The first stanza is my favorite... clockwork eloigning... gorgeous. Bravo! ~hg |
| Anaare 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I enjoyed this very much. Excellent work! |