Wow, that's so sad. Oh, the bitter irony of it all!

:D Hinzy, need I say anything? You rock mate! :D lol I am truly envious! Mashallah you're an amazing poet! My poems look like 2-year-old kiddy stuff :P Great job!

nice! awesome poem sad ending but an awesome ending too wow...

I really like this; it fits with the world. It’s odd how people think they alone experience pain, but that’s also in our nature to think like that. Although, it is annoying when some hypochondriac starts whining. I really like this, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.