The rhythm got rough towards the end and a little riddiculous, but I can see why you're probably lauhing. This is twisted.

Thanks for reading Travellers!! Things get crazer along the lines, and they get worse in The Bane of Rendsberg, trust me.

I like this poem. The narrator seems a bit off. I like that. Psyochtic works for me. I like the bit where she cut the eyes out of the corpses. Yes, I am familiar with both story and game of "Call of Chthulu" It is hard to find someone out there familiar with Lovecraft stuff. I like the Nylarthotep. Damn, that's hard to spell!

You sick, sick little person. HA, I love it. It's disturbing but in a good way. And don't slam yourself. This has a pretty good rhyme scheme and it makes for a good epic in a Tim Burtonish sense. The little friend thing was hilarious. Was she possessed, or was it just her own inner psychopath showing through? Incidentally, have you watched Scotland, PA (modern day reinactment of Macbeth?) because that spot thing made me think, "OMG! YAY!" lol. I feel very sick and disturbed myself now. Anyway, great piece of writing. I should stop ranting and raving now before the nice men in the white coats come along ...

kudos!

choco

Thank you zootles. I can see now that it must be great work, seeing as you couldn't find anything wrong with it, you simply called me a **, improperly quoted, and laughed a lot. thank you for the ego boost. I'm happy to see that only a blithering moron doesn't like it and that everyone else enjoys it. Once you learn to spell and how to read, I would appreciate some constructive criticism from you. Thank you every one else for posting seriously with out typos. I don't believe zootles knows what they were trying to achieve when the quoted "I still see my little friend! hahahaha you suck at... blah blah blah, because they didn't end the quotation showing a lack of attention... Hm... Take english for another year or two, then come back. Thank you.

This is the worst poem I ever read: "I still see my little friend! hahahaha you suck at writing and your poems are a depressing abyss!!hahahahahh and your the one giving in to my pleas for attention i'm not making you read my epic novels!!HAHAAHAHAH you suck **

Har har! A good laugh! Nice rhyming. I can just imagine some little demonic girl saying it, head spinning around. THAT MAKES ME LAUGH EVEN MORE!

I want to be the first to review this piece. This is quite possibly the best poem on this site. And no I'm not joking. I love Cthulhu. And I love this poem.