I only just disocvered this and i haven't made it past the third chapter but i just wanted to say that being gay (but a girl) myself its amazing how easy it is to relate, even though it always felt like you were alone. and i had a friend who had exactly the same reaction as Angela... i cant say i was woo impressed either. so. what im trying to say IS. its a great story, and i love the emotions in it so far. i look forward ro finishing it...

Love it!

I just hope that they will be together at last..

They would make a cute couple... I don't really like Marco.. Don't ask why cause I don't really know.. I just don't..

/S

now i am more than lost

I, personally, would read anything more you posted for this story.

I try to be a good reviewer and actually say something specific about the piece I'm reviewing, so, let's see...well, this chapter is kind of suspenseful at the end. Because of the interesting complications - Jake getting lost, the phone mix-up, etc. So I'm interested in reading more. Very interesting. And Marco is interesting too, because it feels like there's a lot the other characters (and, therefore, the readers) don't know about him, so I'm curious about him. And it kind of seems like we might be about to find out? Like in the next chapter, if you continue. Which, again, I really hope you do.

Please, PLEASE, continue. I like your story very much.

I can understand how you feel, but I do hope you continue because I really wish to find out what happens. I personally, like this story a lot. I especially like Jake, for some reason. Well I think it's great, so keep it up if you can! But if not, well...it happens.

Continue please =]
I want to know the ending.

You must continue and introduce a new character called Rob XD Pfft you so didn't try hard enough to put Brand New lyrics in...they could have been in the background...or something. I am listening to them now XD I need the toilet but there has been someone in there for ages :(

mm, i will definatly read it if you continue updating.


i can understand not wanting to go back and edit things, being partially lazy myself (not that you are lazy, but that would definatly be my reason. that and no time, anyway)


i do like this story very much, truly.

O.o Talk about a total twist in the situation. I guess the whole waiting stuff really helps. This is soo good with all the jealousy n' all. *Gasp* Jake and Marco have finally met or should I say heard. LOL I guess soon it'll be more interesting. Oh! Plz don't discontinue it. LOL it's your story but still I guess it's finally up to you to decide. I hope everything is all right.

see ya

loved it, please update soon!

Hey,

Nice updated..though lately I'm missing out on the fun part..but I guess it's after all a Boy's life. ^.^

Though I hope you'll get around and have character interactions soon rather than the persona

lol.. I miss your work ... see ya

OMG you haven't updated this in ages. But then I haven't written anything in forever. I am so depressed right now (not clinically but whatever), it looks like I won't be getting to see Brand New. So dedicate the next chapter to me and put some Brand New lyrics in it.

interesting


i miss updates of this

wow i love this! what a great story, you write really well i love alexd and jake! please please please update soon!