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ii 2006-02-21 . chapter 1
I was originally attracted to this piece by your use of "inspiration-ish-y-ness". I found it such a funny word that I had to look at what was inside. And boy was I surprised.

This is a wonderful and well thought out poem. I like the alliteration and the use of punctuation, as well as your words. (I'm in love with words.) The whole poem is so smooth and clear and...wow.
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