Ah, the sea. I often feel this way when visiting the ocean, as if swimming out into the waves can make me a part of the water itself. Only problem I saw was "immerge" should be "emerge" but I'm not going to beckon you to upload the whole poem again just for one error (because I know I never would). Beautiful images, it caught my attention and kept my interest. :)

I love this...*sighs* so dreamy like that feeling you have of peace just between wakefullness and sleep...and I know this feeling so well. You see that huge mass of water stretched out in front of you and there's something in your soul that just reaches out to it, wants to meld into it. "I wish to slip under the blanket of warm water"...lovely.

Wow, so gorgeously written! *applaudes and gives you a jar of cookies*. You're awesome! Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^

Very nice. I enjoyed reading this. Hope to see more!