 Bitter.Sweet.Endings 2006-03-21 . chapter 1hey.
First, I'd like to say I absolutely loved it. If this isn't your beest, you must be some awesome poet(ess) person... I can relate sao much to it.
Second, I'd like to thank you for the AMAZING review. Reviews make me feel warm and fuzy. and that one was like ice cream. or chocolate. or possoms. THnks. You're awesome. |
 Ryan Colt 2006-03-21 . chapter 1I know what you mean, I always feel bad when my friends are going through rough times, I always seem to get involved in it and try to help.. |
 Moondog Dozier 2006-03-16 . chapter 1True sentiment. The raw emotion that the reader feels creates an empathy for the focus of the work. Honest and heartfelt. Well done |
 Remnants 2006-03-07 . chapter 1i dont think it was to long at all. i think this is a very heart felt poem. i have to say"If only it was realitythat you were running to"such a great lineand you had a very powerfull ending as well. i dont know what you mean when you say "i know its not one of my best" this poem was great |
 the sneaky weasel 2006-03-06 . chapter 1T_T so touching!!
when my friends or family are in trouble and in pain i feel like there is nothing i can do to make them feel better
w2g!!^_^ |
 FunkyFlower17 2006-03-05 . chapter 1this is an absolutely beautiful and touching poem. i wish ur friend luck and i hope she appreciates and understands it. maybe not your best but like u said, it's for your friends and it doesnt matter about poetic techniques when ur writing from your heart. absolutely beautiful and sweet, good luck,
~mez~ |
 QueenVixta 2006-02-25 . chapter 1I can totally relate to this poem. I think you wrote it really well and I actually think that it's one of your best pieces. Touching and beautiful. Well done and sorry for not reviewing sooner! V x |
 Game-Master-Gal 2006-02-23 . chapter 1Woah, amazing, I have a best friend, no a sister not by blood that I feel the same way about. Ya see I don't want to go into detail, but her husband soon to be, committed suicide on her birthday and all I could do was that. I can hug anyone else, smile at them, but not her and I never got why until now.
Thank you for making me understand, and grand work, keep it up |
 Sinner By Nature 2006-02-22 . chapter 1Yes it IS 1 of u r best u idiot! i Love it! it's amazing..i love how u say: crying silently ..this is amazing..its how i feel. poor thing shwai6er, huh? |
 PrettyPunk 2006-02-22 . chapter 1I think this is areally great poem! and I really liked it!.. I hope you're alrigh and your friend too, cuz it was a bit sad...but good..! |
 sunday night sky 2006-02-21 . chapter 1i can tell that this comes straight from the heart, which makes it more beautiful because its honest. i love the last stanza - nice job! |