Aw, that's mad depressing...good words and rhythm, with truth. But is there no hope?

This was so sad ;-; I loved the wording.

But I guess it's alrightEven Peter Pan has nightmares

I loved how that stands out. That would have to be my favorite part ^^ Nice write!

Wow. Truly breathtaking.

Peter Pan is just such a magical character - a boy who will never grow up to be a man - or a man in the purest form of a boy. I love how you wove your story into this. Wonderful work.

Much love,Juliet.