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| Leeona Trance 2006-03-22 ch 1,  | abuseI really like it, tho I'm not sure what the meaning is behind it... and I'm curious if you just date your poems or if feb 21st is special somehow. Nice job, getting me wondering. :) ~Leeona Trance |
| SilverRain1011 2006-03-18 ch 1, | abuseI like it! I love how you used the imagery in "stay in the same vein, tube showing the obvious route to more thief-lovers". Deep, very deep. |
| Duck8 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseCool i like it :D |
| AllyCred 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abuseI like it very well written and its just amazing, kinda has me speechless, i love it, well done! |
| AchtungBabyAchtung 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abusei love the encrypted title, i added them and then it made sense. beautiful. iz x |
| mizu no kokoro 2006-02-24 ch 1, | abusenot completely sure of the deeper meaning, but it has your classic diction that is unique beyond compare~ awesome keep writing! |
| White Tea and Ginger 2006-02-23 ch 1, | abuseThe last stanza was great. |
| gitana 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseIt's an interesting way of looking at age (at least, I'm assuming that's where the XVII comes from, and you know what they say about assuming...) Ah well. Very subtle, understated, and yet powerful. I love the imagery contained in 'thief-lovers.' And the last line -- ! No words. Burns like fire. ~HG x |
| xHannahx 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abusehmm... i like the last stanza, tis good stuff. Han. |
| breezy nostrils 2006-02-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseit's me again, *sigh* they won't let me review twice. anyway, i just realized that the title spells out 17, which is cool. haha (i wasn't paying any attention before) so i guess i can kind of relate to the beginning a lot, not so much the end. but i'm sure i'll find that "special someone" someday, somehow. |
| Calligrapher of Hearts 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abuse*Shnugglez* Too sombre to function... It sparkles entirely of you Unca. Keep looking. You deserve it. xhXix |
| Faithless Juliet 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abuseXVII - ok so this just shows how American I am (they don‘t teach us roman numerals anymore in school) so I’m guessing... There’s a 4, and a five, and two (maybe?) (Avoided seeing every year the same.) This is interesting to me; I think emotionally I do the exact opposite. For so long such a big chunk of time was the same and it drove me crazy. And not focused onbeing rescued orunfolding any cover,well prepared to justcontinue andstay in the same vein- I think this, apart from the end is my favorite - you talk about just being, existing without need to improve yourself for someone else. Not needing to wait for something to come that others claim you need. Strength in hidden corners. Prelude to becomingattachedagain.- Saying that the above poem was everything else until now. I like that. Your review of “Main” was so sweet and right on the mark (I don‘t think anyone else got the ripples as a part of water as a part of people issue) so bonus points for you. And you and your rambling was just so adorable (someone‘s got a new boy) so cute. I hope all goes well in that department. Rock on. Write good poetry! Juliet. |
| myno 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abuseexcellent. i've nothing else to say. |
| Aquafied 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abusePrelude to becomingattachedagain.-detatch yourself from realityand i forgot how to spell today (it is quite tragic anyhow, anyway.) i like it. |
| breezy nostrils 2006-02-21 ch 1, | abusewow...(haha I know what you're talking about. and that reference at the end) aw...i'm happy for you, guy *cough* girl. anyway, beautiful imagery as usual. up to your standards for sure. |