man i love this. i love the chewing gum bit, oh how i can relate. private school i'm guessing? i love it, this poetic ** in which u experienced. i wish i get one soon... haha x x x

I only liked the first two, personally, but those were great. looking forward to more of your stuff.

P.S.: If you're interested, I have a couple more chapters of "The Specimen" up.

Um, this was pretty good. Not your usual fiction that I have come to know and love, but solid nonetheless.