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| Mairi Cross 2007-08-13 ch 12,  | abuseWah! I haven't come here in so long and when I come back no more story! *sniff*. Oh well, I'll get over it. :) SO sorry to hear about that! I would scream! |
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 2006-07-25 ch 12, | abusesorry to hear about that! hope everything gets fixed. dieing to know what happens next! i love this story! ~SarahJane |
| SightX 2006-06-15 ch 12, | abuseSigh. That is radically depressing. Well, I agree, you have to have a life out side of writing, though you really make me feel lazy because I haven't sat down to write ANY of the things in my journal. (though I do have a fanfiction story up on ffnet under the same user name) I hope you find some way to complete the story. I also would be interested in seeing you re-write this over the summer, for all that it would be an incredible amount of work. I must sigh again, because things were just getting so interesting. I suppose I will just have to check in periodically. good luck with any and all tests you have to write. Anxiously yours, -end transmission- |
| Black and White Dreams 2006-05-04 ch 12, | abusewow this an excellant story! sounds similar to Eragon and Harry Potter at some parts but its really good! I love fantasy, its the only thing i read! by the way, Seth is my favorite character. : ) excellant job! update very very very very soon! |
| azncarmii 2006-04-25 ch 10, anon. | abuseooh i cant wait for the next chapter xD please update soon! |
| azncarmii 2006-04-25 ch 9, anon. | abusehey great story! um, i thot the other half had a different mom...so y is she sad that the other side's mom died...and how can they have two moms?...i don't get it...but its a really good story plot and i hope you'll take it off hiatus soon! : D |
| Somewhere In Between 2006-04-19 ch 11, | abusetotally understandable... but it still sucks.. lol hope it gets fixed soon!! i LOVE this story!! ~Alex |
| Sarah 2006-04-19 ch 11, anon. | abuseThat sucks about your laptop. I just started reading this today. It's really good. Just curious: Have you ever read Eragon and Eldest? Because alot of things in your story remind me of those books. |
| The Fourth Fate 2006-04-10 ch 3, | abuseWOW. This is great so far. I CAN'T wait for more. I LOVE Seth. ahh he's too sexy. Omg. And wow Atlanta... I know about Atlanta like woah it's a real city. Haha. This is amazing and I love all the imagery and how incredible everything is. Wow, just wow. I love it. |
| The Fourth Fate 2006-04-10 ch 2, | abuseSO FREAKING SCARY. Omg. I'm like about to wet my pants. I kept checking behind me to make sure Loktra wasn't there. AH. The end is really good too. Haha. I love this so far. On to the next chapter... La la la. |
| The Fourth Fate 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseOo Chilling and hooking opener. I love it. It's SO creepy and ahh the protagonist is really easy to relate to (which is great, esspecially this early on) and the details and descriptions are just fabulous. I can see everything perfectly. |
| Yaolyn 2006-04-09 ch 11, | abuseThis is a great story! I'm sorry about your laptop, though you should find a new charger as soon as possible for I won't survive if I don't get to read the next chapter soon (I know this sounds overly dramatic and that this sentence is way too long and I am supposed to use more dots and commas).So...Update soon! |
| Kali Ammit 2006-04-08 ch 11, | abuseHey, thanks for reveiwing my story. I decided to check out your writing, and I'm liking this story. You could put a bit more detail, but I'm liking the plot line. Her mother really isn't dead is she? |
| fairEtales 2006-04-06 ch 11, | abuseThank you! I understand...Hopefully you will get it fixed soon! |
| SarahJaneDrkAngl05 2006-04-06 ch 11, | abusehope you get it fixed soon! i know how it is tho with comps and all. for a while i couldnt update bc mine was broke and it sucks. ny ways good luck gettin it fixed and yay for the other story! its good as well! ~SarahJane |