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anonymously-me 2007-08-20 . chapter 1
This shows a pen through an author's perspective.

(I'm wondering how this got so many reviews. I don't even have that many hits on my work. Is it the time of day you post or what? Sorry to bug you, but I'm curious. Could you send a reply?)
magnusthewolf 2007-01-27 . chapter 1
this is awesome and i love the metaphors and imagery :) great job!~magnus
BITT3RSW33T 2006-12-29 . chapter 1
This is extraodinary! Really well written!
Leaving Here 2006-08-08 . chapter 1
wow. this is really good. ~Liz
Sol9 2006-07-24 . chapter 1
I think it would be safe for me to say, that this is the best peom I've ever read on FictionPress. I always feel stupid when I review poems/stories of this quality because I never have anything constructive to say. You're at a writing level far higher than myself... I'll be reading more of your stuff!
Galadh Niniel 2006-07-06 . chapter 1
Beautifully said and very true. I like the way you take an object and personify it, speaking from its point of view.
Asinine Epiphany 2006-07-02 . chapter 1
a little arrogant, aren't we? But alas, I have no room to talk when it comes to arrogance. Number 119 here to tell you that this was a very good poem. Statistic one-one-nine, signing out
Godly Luke Staden 2006-06-12 . chapter 1
VERY VERY good! i really liked it

keep writing ~Godly Luke Staden~
x.Insanely Serene.x 2006-06-07 . chapter 1
Love it! YOu know what I think, a while back i wrote you a message^_^

Love ya lots, Serenity
Tobino 2006-06-06 . chapter 1
your very good. you tend to think abstractly, and that's awesome. Good job!
nadorj 2006-05-30 . chapter 1
You did this poem very well! The thing I like most about it is that you took something so small and made it so big this peice is wonderful!
angel1357 2006-05-16 . chapter 1
I like to think about things like that, that way to. To think about what they really arte, and what they do for you...

Well, thanks for reviewing!
Black and White Dreams 2006-05-07 . chapter 1
aw thats so cute! sweet poem, pens rock! i would die if there was no such thing as pens... great job! --Black and White Dreams
vash's gir 2006-05-01 . chapter 1
And the sequel...A Keyboard...lol...i like it..its cute
clara12 2006-04-23 . chapter 1
fantastic! seriously. that blew me away, because of the simplicity of a pen yet the meaning was so profound and deep! and the metaphors- each word was true.. i liked the personification-it was very entertaining. n_n excellent job!
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