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| SimplySweetnSour 2008-01-25 ch 2,  | abuse"Rachel turned him out" tuned :) |
| I Darkness 2007-08-08 ch 14, | abuseGARR! and you just have leave it there didn't you? please update soon! *begging here* |
| Kar3b3ar 2007-06-06 ch 14, | abuseupdate por favor. its a great story, i like rachel she's perky but not annoyingly and nicolo...is just intense, but i like how you connected their lives together because both have a bad home, so please continute. |
| Pen Filled Ink 2007-04-26 ch 12, | abusehey good story you have here. good plot. There are some grammatical mistakes such as "witch" should be switched to "which" in some places. But other than that I like it. |
| xLoveAddictx 2007-04-25 ch 14, | abuseOh Rachel and Nicolo! Luv them together! lol. neway great chapter! update soon. |
| analinah 2007-03-20 ch 14, anon. | abuseit's great! i really like it, so update soon! i just read the WHOLE thing in one sitting. and definitely nicolo(that's a hott name :D ), not dane. |
| Black Pearl n Shadowz 2007-03-20 ch 14, | abuseHAHAH...i liked the confrontation...cant wait to see how you'll have him react to her being with someone else... |
| Seattle grunge-love 2007-03-18 ch 14, anon. | abuseWoo! Chappie 14 is up and running...I think I'm gonna cry. *sobs uncontrollably* This means I need to haul ** on getting the last 4 chapters edited. You have six pages of reviews for this story. Did you know that!?! |
| Miss.Me So HAHA 2007-03-16 ch 14, | abuseyour story is grand! |
| SimplySweetnSour 2007-03-11 ch 14, | abuseoi! what took you so long! |
| Evil 2007-03-10 ch 14, anon. | abusePretty good story going. I hope Rachel and Nicolo end up together, although maybe it would be better if she ended up with no one... Some spelling and grammar problems in this chapter. Nothing that editing can't fix :) |
| IGNIS Elementi 2007-03-10 ch 14, | abuseO my. Update soon. |
| sasha the water goddess 2007-02-24 ch 13, anon. | abuseupdate soon! |
| frackandbonechick 2007-01-14 ch 13, | abusethis is a really good story so far, and i hope that you will continue it soon Cheers Michelle |
| Candy Soap 2007-01-05 ch 13, | abuseupdate update :] it's good! |