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| perpetual questions 2007-05-14 ch 1,  | abuseLovely. I like these - especially the way you end them, "high on the music". Nice work. |
| a lonely september 2006-03-08 ch 1, | abusesometimes written is prettier. no matter what they say, the look is kinda important too. |
| breezy nostrils 2006-02-25 ch 1, | abusewow that's so pretty. haha nice author's note. keep on going! |
| Atelophobia 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseSure you can. (: Thanks for the reviews. |
| scaredconfused 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseWow! GREAT JOB! I'm a ballrina, so I REALLY appriciated these. MAy I have permission to copy them and put them on another site? I will NOT take credit for them... I just, really like them. I would LOVE to see more good haikus like this... I just got new ballet shoes today! So... yeah, thisreally touched me. Sweet, short simple, but touching. |
| sylvia's syndrome 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseVery imaginative and original! I like the concept of words moving like a dancer – it creates fantastic imagery and is very thought-provoking. Keep writing! |
| The Un-great-ful 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseAtelophobia - fear of imperfection. Good job I don't have it! I like these haiku's, they're quality. People say they like mine too, so they must be good as well. Will read more of yo stuff, you seem like a decent writer. Alan. |
| TawnyBEEFman000000000000Gas... 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseThe water in the sink whirls and twirls and swirls. I get into trouble for wasting water and eating the dog's food. |