i like it.kep writing..~Liz

this one impresses me (:

second stanza is ace, 4th stanza/line thing is a cliche in the right place = appropriate, sixth stanza is angstay and last stanza is love.

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HHm... interesting idea. I don't care for the rythm, or rhyme theme, or lack ther of, buut other than that I think it's good. good idea, excellent choice of words.