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| hippie92 2006-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abusethe best freakin' poem ever! |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-02-22 ch 1,  | abuseThis work is remarkably well developed and thought out. It encompasses so much of the exterior scene and the interior feelings of the individual. It is indeed a portrait. Sad, but wonderfully well written. |
| SpilledInk 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseamazing you captured a vivid story in one poem, so detailed and captivating was so horribly glad I could not see her eyes "So terribly certain that if she turned to me thenI might die from what she was living." Great job, keep writing +SpiLLeD InK+ |
| marti10 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseGreat poem! Can you please read my story called: Olympia |
| Trinity Joselyn Carter 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is the best poem I think I've ever read. I have no suggestion for correction or change. Just keep writing the way you are. |