Fydor,

This is a very funny piece of literature, I would like to read more. The only comment I have is that some of the words you used like, 'wisened' and 'unadulterated' I couldn't tell if they were really words or not.

Keep it up, this is good stuff.

-Bodach

Lovely! This is a nice start, and I look forward to future chapters and to seeing how the story develops.

I like the warmth of your tone towards the subject, and how you make him a flawed, yet sympathetic character.

Plus, the idea of Oedipus Rex saying 'Curse ye fates! Yarrgghh!' is a surefire winner in my book. ^_^