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Reviews For: Xanadu I Wait For You…Come Hither… I Beseech You

Mienaku
2007-01-27
ch 1,
abuse"Layers upon heaped upon layers of torturous living…in despairing depths… where ever it was that death waited, in the shadows lurking, lingering"

Those lines really sucked me into this poem.

I must say before i got to the end of this poem i felt as though i was flipping through the pages of a book of someone's life. It seemed like you were going through someone's memory..there happiness, sadness and pain. Lovingly written.

I wish i had better words to express how beautifuly written this is.
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