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| Mienaku 2007-01-27 ch 1,  | abuse"Layers upon heaped upon layers of torturous living…in despairing depths… where ever it was that death waited, in the shadows lurking, lingering" Those lines really sucked me into this poem. I must say before i got to the end of this poem i felt as though i was flipping through the pages of a book of someone's life. It seemed like you were going through someone's memory..there happiness, sadness and pain. Lovingly written. I wish i had better words to express how beautifuly written this is. |