okay i know that this story is reaching the 2 year updated mark, but since I'm sucha HUGE fan of your writing i just have to beg here for you to update this AMAZING story!

really tho, it's awesome!

*pokes* I won't stop poking you until you update *pokes* hehe sorry I forgot to respond to your message =O yes I have an aim xxfakexfacesxx and a yim nuclear_x_love =D I go on the yim more often nbut whatever you want to chat on, just hollar =) by the way, I just finished re-reading this story and I love it more than the first time. I love how childish Gareth is and I want to sob hystarically every time those fearful memories envade little Alic's mind. ^_^

ok, let me insert a fanservice squeal in here. *does so* there, i'm satisfied. i'd be even more so if they finally got to the dirty tango between the sheets (or on top of the sheets, i'm no stickler for rules in the bedroom!). but you knkow me, dirty ol' pervert. ^^ your writing is still too sweet for me sometimes, and i have to take a break or go insane with the goodness. that's one of the things i adore about it, really.

i'd love to see my writing coupled with yours, because we're so different that we mesh well. yeah.

much love! ~xanth

ruggedly handsome. i let out another giggle at that one. this pair is really far too sweet. far too sweet, indeed. *sugar shock*

i think i giggled. my god, i do think i did. *shameful pleasure*

i'm still amused. i should be writing something well rounded i suppose, but i can't help but to want to get on to the next chapter. you always could do that to me, garrett! spin a web of prettyful words that make me melt. ^^

i just write hooks and things that make people see things a bit differently than they might have. such as a relationship between nephew and uncle. or father and son. or brothers. or...bah, you get it.

a lovable and naive vampire. Gareth rocks. ^^

i'm getting a new perspective on vampirism than the one i always use. it's interesting! and all this talk of hunger made me hungry too. but not for blood that makes me feel ill. *laughs* potatoes! yeah!

i can't help but laugh at the idea of a vampire gareth. >< i apologize for that, but i can't help it. he's gently evil. *laughs*

i smile and totter off to bed. *laughs* i wish i could be more "helpful" and "comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved" which i think is only some of the grammer, but that's must my editing shot coming out to the forefront. i'm a fanservice reviewer at the moment. maybe tomrrow will see me in a more intellectual mood.

i can write while being brainless it seems. i'm good at rambling and pretending i know what i'm talking about. my business communications instructor called it 'fog' and i got marked off for it in the 'mock business letters' assignment we were given. rigamarole. ><

off subject! *prods self to bed* til next time, garrett.

foreshadowing cliffhanger! *gasp* it's hard for me to be worried about it, because i know i can just push the button and keep reading, not to mention i'm listening to shawn mullens and even the most sad song of his can make me happy for no apparent reason. he's crazy/sane that way, i love his music.

ogod, sidetracked! whoops.

ah, passing notes. *laughs at the hilarity of it all* my goodness.

sadness. gareth never really grew up, huh. and i don't know, but all the characters seem younger than their true age (even rowan) except for the wife, who seems like an old harpy already. jeezum. *laughs*

like a loser, it's taken me this long to read this story, but i'm starting it! ha! not so loserly anymore. ><

i still think you create beauty in words, my god. i weep. *weepage*

haha I have been looking for this story all night! (I had read it a LONG time ago) and now I am going to re-read it! ^^