Whoa... sounds like someone I know. She wants to kill me though hehe... my bro is feeding her lies and she's really distraught. The poem uses excellent imagery, and I AM SURE (Yay) that this is a shakespearian sonnet style. Even better, since me like :P

Good Job!

First one to review! Haha. Anyway, I think this poem is realy good. But why were you so mad? Anyway, great job, as always.